Used Scuba Diving Equipment – Does This Make Sense?
Used Scuba Diving Equipment – The ocean covers approximately 71% of the earth’s surface. The mystery of the deep has fascinated people for thousands of years and scuba diving has allowed people to discover it for themselves. Even though much of the bottom of the world’s oceans is unexplored and unmapped, scuba diving allows ordinary people to explore and experience part of the underwater world.
Scuba is the acronym for Self Contained Underwater Breathing Apparatus. A portable metal tank attached to the back of a diver supplies compressed for people to stay underwater for great lengths of time. Scuba diving as a recreational sport is becoming more popular nowadays. Recreational diving uses only compressed air as the breathing mixture, is never done solo, does not exceed a depth of 40 metres and doesn’t require decompression stops. Professional diving, used for military, governmental, commercial and scientific purposes, serves a specific mission for each dive and divers are paid to dive. Technical diving exceeds recreational limits but is not for profit. The nature of their diving and type of equipment used exceed the boundaries of Recreational Scuba Diving.
Make any changes you want, to me this doesn’t flow nicely. Thanks 
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Comments on Used Scuba Diving Equipment – Does This Make Sense?
5:31 am
makes perfect sense to me
9:06 pm
your paragraphs alone sound fine but you just go from talking about one thing to talking about something different. you have to put a sentence in there that connects the two. you are talking about the experience and then just leap into talking about what it is.
sorry its not a lot but i hope it helps at least a little bit
12:46 am
I would make only the changes shown below:
A portable metal tank attached to the back of a diver supplies compressed air for people to stay underwater for great lengths of time. Scuba diving is becoming more popular as a recreational sport.
I think that your material flows nicely, is not superflous, and states the facts accurately. Good work!
4:44 pm
Seventy one percent of the earth lies underwater and the mystery of that deep unknown has fascinated mankind for thousands of years.Today, scuba diving allows people to experience it for themselves. Even though much of the world’s oceans are still unexplored and unmapped, scuba diving allows ordinary people to discover and explore part of the underwater world.
Scuba is the acronym for Self Contained Underwater Breathing Apparatus.This equipment consists of a portable metal tank attached to the diver’s back that supplies compressed air which allows people to stay underwater for extended periods of time. Scuba diving as a recreational sport has become extremely popular and people take scuba vacations nowadays. Recreational scuba diving uses only compressed air as the breathing mixture, is never done solo, does not exceed a depth of 40 metres and doesn’t require decompression stops.
Other forms of diving, such as professional diving, used for military, governmental, commercial and scientific purposes, involves a specific mission for each dive and divers are paid to dive. Technical diving exceeds recreational limits but is not for profit.
The nature of these other dives and the type of equipment used far exceed the boundaries of Recreational Scuba Diving. However, they add much to our knowledge of the vast uncharted, underwater world that lies all around us.