Comments on: Used Scuba Diving Equipment – Does This Make Sense? http://scubawiz.com/scuba-gear-reviews/does-this-make-sense/ Scuba Gear Reviews Tue, 22 Sep 2009 08:06:34 +0000 hourly 1 By: hickcrazy1 http://scubawiz.com/scuba-gear-reviews/does-this-make-sense/#comment-31 hickcrazy1 Sun, 12 Jul 2009 16:44:19 +0000 http://scubawiz.com/?p=20#comment-31 Seventy one percent of the earth lies underwater and the mystery of that deep unknown has fascinated mankind for thousands of years.Today, scuba diving allows people to experience it for themselves. Even though much of the world’s oceans are still unexplored and unmapped, scuba diving allows ordinary people to discover and explore part of the underwater world. Scuba is the acronym for Self Contained Underwater Breathing Apparatus.This equipment consists of a portable metal tank attached to the diver's back that supplies compressed air which allows people to stay underwater for extended periods of time. Scuba diving as a recreational sport has become extremely popular and people take scuba vacations nowadays. Recreational scuba diving uses only compressed air as the breathing mixture, is never done solo, does not exceed a depth of 40 metres and doesn’t require decompression stops. Other forms of diving, such as professional diving, used for military, governmental, commercial and scientific purposes, involves a specific mission for each dive and divers are paid to dive. Technical diving exceeds recreational limits but is not for profit. The nature of these other dives and the type of equipment used far exceed the boundaries of Recreational Scuba Diving. However, they add much to our knowledge of the vast uncharted, underwater world that lies all around us. Seventy one percent of the earth lies underwater and the mystery of that deep unknown has fascinated mankind for thousands of years.Today, scuba diving allows people to experience it for themselves. Even though much of the world’s oceans are still unexplored and unmapped, scuba diving allows ordinary people to discover and explore part of the underwater world.
Scuba is the acronym for Self Contained Underwater Breathing Apparatus.This equipment consists of a portable metal tank attached to the diver’s back that supplies compressed air which allows people to stay underwater for extended periods of time. Scuba diving as a recreational sport has become extremely popular and people take scuba vacations nowadays. Recreational scuba diving uses only compressed air as the breathing mixture, is never done solo, does not exceed a depth of 40 metres and doesn’t require decompression stops.
Other forms of diving, such as professional diving, used for military, governmental, commercial and scientific purposes, involves a specific mission for each dive and divers are paid to dive. Technical diving exceeds recreational limits but is not for profit.
The nature of these other dives and the type of equipment used far exceed the boundaries of Recreational Scuba Diving. However, they add much to our knowledge of the vast uncharted, underwater world that lies all around us.

]]> By: masince1986 http://scubawiz.com/scuba-gear-reviews/does-this-make-sense/#comment-30 masince1986 Sun, 12 Jul 2009 00:46:32 +0000 http://scubawiz.com/?p=20#comment-30 I would make only the changes shown below: A portable metal tank attached to the back of a diver supplies compressed air for people to stay underwater for great lengths of time. Scuba diving is becoming more popular as a recreational sport. I think that your material flows nicely, is not superflous, and states the facts accurately. Good work! I would make only the changes shown below:

A portable metal tank attached to the back of a diver supplies compressed air for people to stay underwater for great lengths of time. Scuba diving is becoming more popular as a recreational sport.

I think that your material flows nicely, is not superflous, and states the facts accurately. Good work!

]]> By: hmward09 http://scubawiz.com/scuba-gear-reviews/does-this-make-sense/#comment-29 hmward09 Fri, 10 Jul 2009 21:06:34 +0000 http://scubawiz.com/?p=20#comment-29 your paragraphs alone sound fine but you just go from talking about one thing to talking about something different. you have to put a sentence in there that connects the two. you are talking about the experience and then just leap into talking about what it is. sorry its not a lot but i hope it helps at least a little bit your paragraphs alone sound fine but you just go from talking about one thing to talking about something different. you have to put a sentence in there that connects the two. you are talking about the experience and then just leap into talking about what it is.

sorry its not a lot but i hope it helps at least a little bit

]]> By: barbara b http://scubawiz.com/scuba-gear-reviews/does-this-make-sense/#comment-28 barbara b Fri, 10 Jul 2009 05:31:33 +0000 http://scubawiz.com/?p=20#comment-28 makes perfect sense to me makes perfect sense to me

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